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    Jesse's "Sure to be later" website

    Since I wasn't inspiring any technical assistance in the vault I decided to list questions under the creative forum.

    The site was originally intended as a cover for secret communications with a friend. Unfortunately, her oppressive and abusive husband found her out before I could get it in place. I found out months later that after he broke her arm he took her IPod, the only access to the web he ever allowed her. Long story.

    So, the site was intended to appeal to his excessive sexual nature but be too small for him to be concerned with for very long. When he searched her IPod he wouldn't have found anything incriminating.

    Although the site is being revamped for public consumption, some of its original features still linger. Like the banner girl.

    I surprised myself with how it turned out. I am reluctant to give her up. The site is now for short stories of an adult nature. I use adult as gritty and not specifically erotic, although the hope is to find almost anything that would appeal to adult tastes. Only text. No images.

    I want to draw in the female writer even more so than the male. I find the female writer reaches me more than the male writer's general lack of sensitivity.

    The site encourages every orientation and for that I don't want it to come off as chauvinistic or male dominant. So...


    • Should I keep the banner girl as is?
    • Put her in a bikini?
    • Put her in a parka?
    • Replace her with a banner with no sexualized implication?




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    Since it is an adult story site, I think that you should keep the banner as is... she fits the theme nicely IMO.

    As an aside, your friend's husband belongs in jail. I've been through that experience myself unfortunately and he deserves to have the book thrown at him....



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    Thanks, Jenny. I started with a photo but in the end it is mostly my own art, so I'm bias.


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    if you are keeping the drawing look, perhaps change the mouth/eyes/pencil
    to a more comicbook or watercolour style.

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    I'll play with it

    wait...not that

    I'll tinker with the image and see how it looks, but I like the reality built on fantasy implication.


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    I think she's damn near perfect, your drawing. Love the red lipstick, it says "seduction". So even in a parka, she'd be sexy.

    You drew her? If so, well done.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Toxic_Cherub View Post
    You drew her? If so, well done.
    Not without a bit of cheating. It has been a while since I could draw like that. Was a time.


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